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Friday, July 29, 2016

William's The sad elder chimp.

This is my mindmup of Space Chimp Planning for my narrative story 




2 comments:

  1. Well done William, I like the way your Mindmup is a good plan. Instead just a photo you can make a screencast telling people what your mindmup is all about?

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  2. Well done William. You hve created a very detailed mindmup. I really like the detail in the events. How will this help you write your narrative? I look forward to reading your story.

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