The night before christmas

In writing we have been working on narrated storeys and I have made one that you may like it is the night before christmas.

I hope you like my writing and please leave a comment.

Here is my writing.

It was the night before christmas and the puppy dogs were outside  Santa’s workshop. The to puppy dogs were playing in the snow. The puppies looked like they were white and fluffy and the white fur on the puppies was camouflaged in with the snow.  

The puppy dogs were having a snowball fight, when they threw the snowball every time it would go splat! and the snow from the ball would go everywhere. Which made them laugh and laugh. They were having a great time.

Then the puppy dogs went for a walk down the snowy path on there way passed a sign that could speak it spoken “beware of the dog catcher’ .

The dogs did not see or hear the sign and they walk right passed it and they went straight into the dog catcher’s property.

When the the dogs went into the property the dog catcher had cameras all around the property.

He also had some tripwires and some other spy gear so he could catch all the dogs in the North Pole.

And when Benji went in, he accidentally set off the alarms, and the dog catcher got Benji . Then Angel rushed home to report what had happened back to Santa.

The dog catcher put Benji in the cage and he put it on top of a shelf with only water for him  to drink. Benji was scared up on the shelf because he was on his own.

The dog catcher was thinking that he will get all the dogs at the North Pole.

The dog catcher looked like and old man that likes to hunt Polar bears for their meat.

The dog catcher was going to use the dogs  to sniff out all the polar bears in the North Pole.

When santa got told he went to his electric sled and Angel jumped in with Santa and they went to look for Benji.

They came to the dog catcher house and  Angel started to bark. Santa new that Benji was in that house.

So Santa and Angel went  around the back of the house, and then they found an open window and Santa told Angel go through the window and look for Benji.

if you find Benji  yelp and I will go to the front door and knock and get the dog catcher to the front and you can get Benji  out safely.

So Angel yelp that she found Benji  so santa quickly went to the front door and knock.

And the dog catcher came to the front door and opined it, when the dog catcher saw Santa,Santa told the dog catcher if you don't do the right thing you will get put on the naughty list and that means you will not get any presents.

So Angel got Benji  out safely and they went round the front to Santa and the dog catcher swor the dog and he went to the back to see if the dog he got was still there but it was  Benji  & Angel bullet a electric dog that looked like Benji, then Santa told the dogs to quickly jump in the sled so the dog catcher can not get you, and when he gets back from the back of his house I can say goodbye.

so the dog catcher came back from the back of his house and Santa told him see you later so Santa went back to the workshop with his puppies and he made the dogs two chairs next to him either side so he can keep an eye on both of his puppies.

So Santa and his two puppies lived happily ever after..

Burger Rings in science

In science we have been working on the fat and other unhealthy stuff in food did a burgerring anddone below i have a slideshow of my work and how I did it and the equipment.

Commitment

(In term 4 we are working on Commitment)
(The question is..)
(What does commitment mean to me)
(Look like-Committing to things and sticking with it)
(Sound like-Doing stuff without being told)
(Look like-help the teachers and family)
(Look like-helping mum with the dishes and the laundry)
(Look like ready for learning)
(Feel like When you have done something amazing)

The story of Get,Jif,Jeff

Here is my made up Fairy tail is from th three little pigs

Characters=

Jif ,Jeff, Get and Johnny

The three kids and the big scary and bad Johnny

Once upon time  there was three kids there named Jif, Jeff and get.

Jif was  are sad one  he was wearing a avrals so was the  
other 2 kids so he was making his new straw house,

Get was are happy kid he likes to play ball so he made a wood house,

Jeff  he a are smart and exalit young boy so he made a brick house for himself.

One day there was a man with lots of breath and he came by.

His name was Johnny he went to  Jif and went knock knock and he said
let me in or I blow your house done and he did,
so Jif ran to Get house and seid let me in the is a man trying to get me can you let me in.

He let him in and then Johny came to gut house and knock knock

The big scary Johnny came back to get the two kids he said let me in or
i will blow your house down and the kids said no!

So like he said he blow the wood house done and the too kids ran to Jeff.  +

They knock on the doe and said let me i plus there is a big scary Johnny outside pulse and he let them in.

And then the big scary Johnny knook on the door.Let me in or blow you house done.

They said no so like he said he tried to blow it done.

But he oud not blow it done so he went up to the roof.

The three kids new he was coming down the chimney so the pu wood and turned it on.

And the big scary Johnny fell and he was dying in the fire and he was dead after 1 minute.

And the three kids named Jif Get and Jeff were happy a gen so they lived happily ever after.

The End

My Writing

William Storer

71HeiHei Road

Christchurch

Thursday 21th september

Mr Palmer

180 Waterloo Road

Hornby

Christchurch 8042

Dear Mr Palmer

It is so exciting that the learning center has moved closer to my class,
so when it is morning tea or lunch time It is a lot closer.
I can just go there and I do not have to walk very far.

Nathin,Alex and I like playing Uno,
It is a fun game I think everyone should play it is a good  learning game for other's.

I think that you should get more fun  learning games.
I got a game that I would like to see it is called Emoji Uno.
It is like the other one but you can get points and you can get big points with +4 +2 and skip etc.
Which would also help with our maths learning.

There is about 10 or so people that go to the Learning Center,

It is a fun safe place for everyone to go to. The people that go they like
the games and they like to meet new people.

I like to vs older people they are very hard to bet but I can beat  them.

On cold days I  know a place that I can go. It is a nice and warm place to go.

It’s always cools me down when it is a hot day.
It is a safe and enjoyable place to go to and hang out.

Suggestions:

I think you should add a learning area so you can do your school work.
I think we should have more bean bags and chairs in that learning center.
I think we should also have a games area so we can vs others people.
I think the games area should have tables and chairs that you could put stickers on it so you would
know the chairs with stickers are the gaming area ones.

These are only a few suggestions I think will improve our learning center.

Your sincerely

William Storer