My writing to my Nana

In writing we have ben working on piswading people,we had to write about some one so I did my Nanna. I hope you enjoye my peice of writing.

Dear Nana

I am writing to you because I have an issue that I feel very strongly about and need your help with it. In the past I have noticed that my brotherś Jacob and Joseph are coming to your house and are having more sleepovers at your house then I am.

The question I am asking you today is why is it that my brotherś Jacob and Joseph are allowed to have more sleep overs than me. I have noticed that when I ask you, you always say no because of work and  when they ask you say yes to both of them. When this happens I feel sad and angry because I am always stuck with my little sister Sophie. When it is just Sophie and me, I get so angry because she will not leave me alone and I get even angrier if she doesn't leave me alone.

Nana I have thought of some solutions to solves this problem. I can come and help you and stay with you one weekend, and then next it can be Jacob  and then Joseph, or you can have me and then take both of them.

Or you can have all of at the same time.

You can have Joseph and me or Jacob and me.

Overall I think this would be a good idea and fair for everyone to stay the night.

We get the same amount of time with you, which I believe is important.

You can do some fun things with one person and then you could do different stuff with the other too. It will not matter at all what each brother gets to do with you but most importantly is that we all get to spend some time with you.

 

Thank you nana I hope I can come and spend the night with you