Willam I can feel the emotion as I read your writing .. well done. That was very real for me. If you were to sit down in a week's time and edit it, what do you think you would change?
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ReplyDeleteI can feel the emotion as I read your writing .. well done. That was very real for me. If you were to sit down in a week's time and edit it, what do you think you would change?